CFV 326

Martial Law from Bud Tallman on Vimeo.

Video for one of my production classes.
My own Critique:
  The most effective part of this project is the animation work.  The movements are fluid and lead the eye, using arrangement and lines.  The placement of elements also balances the frame in each scene.
   The main area that could use improvement would be the text itself.  The integration has a lot of room for improvement.  I have found a different typeface to stick in there that will work much better, I feel.  The background and foreground styles conflict slightly. 
Overall, I like the piece but I will go back and do some tweaking when I get my desktop back from being repaired.

Comments and your own critiques welcome